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Lucky Fish

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Allison Xu

Rockville, MD, USA

Walter Johnson High School


Lucky Fish

In the center of Chinatown nestles

a tiny pond where coral-colored

carps outgrow their regular size,

bulging bodies floating in circles

and cramping against each other.

In Chinese, carps are our lucky fish

who sport the garment of wealth and abundance.   

Their eyes glow fluorescent onyx,

their scales gleam like burnished carnelian. 


People feed them fried rice from leftovers,

a human diet to sate their taste buds.

A thin film of grease scatters with curling

froth and foam on the water’s surface.  

The fish keep growing, a mimicry

of pockets jammed with gold.


Mother tosses a quarter into the pond,

without making a wish. 

Any kind of luck, she says.

I watch the coin dip into a ripple and

slip onto the pillow of others, a backdrop

for the motif of coiling overweight fish.


At night, I dream that a carp chants like

a bright red trumpet and releases its pleasure

into my ears. I make out wishing phrases 恭喜发财 

and事事如意 that float like gold confetti.  

I try to bunch the fish in my fist, but it wrings

with a spasm and squirms out of my white knuckles.

It steals down into the shallow current of comfort,

where its underbelly rubs the constellation of coins. 


I love the constant wordplay in this piece: “bulging bodies,” “froth and foam,” and “coral-colored carps.” The descriptions of Chinatown and the “lucky fish” are precise and detailed, and (the) use of imagery heightens the symbolism of the lucky fish all the more."


Allison Xu is a young writer from Maryland. Her poems and short stories have appeared in Blue Marble Review, Backchannels Journal, Unbroken, Paper Lanterns, The Daphne Review, and elsewhere. Allison is the 2023 Youth Poet Laureate of Montgomery County, MD. When she’s not writing, she enjoys reading, baking, and playing with her beagle.

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